《Travelling Around》Reading for Writing PPT

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《Travelling Around》Reading for Writing PPT

第一部分内容：Ⅰ.Pre-writing

(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model

Dear Xiao Li，

My time here in China is going well.I love my new school and classmates.Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army.I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight，and I can’t wait to go.To me the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.It’s amazing that there are more than 8，000 statues，and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.

We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.

We’re taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins.We’re arriving at 9：30 am and will start sightseeing right away，so I hope we sleep well on the train!

I guess that’s all for now！I’ll write again soon and send photos！Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon.

Your friend，

Richard

(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases

①________________ 利用 ②________________ 如下

③________________ 游览 ④________________ 出发

⑤________________ 七日游 ⑥________________ 欣赏风景

⑦________________ 动身去某地 ⑧________________ 和……一起

⑨________________ 即将来临 ⑩________________ 乘公共汽车

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Travelling AroundPPT，第二部分内容：Ⅱ.While-writing

假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。

要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。

2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。

3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。

4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右。

参考词汇：high speed railway高铁　book预订　Disneyland迪士尼乐园　recreation facilities游乐设施　souvenir纪念品　Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆　Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠

Step 1　List the outline of the passage.

Paragraph 1：_____________________________________________

Paragraph 2：____________________________________________

Paragraph 3：_____________________________________________

Step 2　List the words，phrases and sentences.

1.Words and phrases

①________________ vt. 预订　②________________ 登记

③________________ 提前 ④________________ 同时

⑤________________ 四天的旅行

2.Sentences

①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)

As the winter holiday is coming，I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.

②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。(so that)

Upon arriving in Shanghai，we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.

③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(from which)

We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon，from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.

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Travelling AroundPPT，第三部分内容：Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage

Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.

□1.Is there a clear purpose for the trip?

□2.Does each paragraph have a clear main idea?

□3.Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?

□4.Does the writer use commas，stops，and question marks correctly?

□5.Are all the words spelt correctly?

□6.Are all the proper nouns capitalised?

Time and travel destination：

Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army.

Some other places of interest：My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum.We are also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights.

Means of transport：We’re taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins.

1.旅游计划

①My travel plan is as follows.

我的旅行计划如下。

②Here/Below is my travel plan.

这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。

③Winter holiday is coming.I have a plan for it.

寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。

2.旅游目的地

①This month，I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends，which is supposed to be a seven-day trip.

这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。

②I’m planning to travel to Suzhou，a city called Eastern Venice.